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Wow....a brilliant piece! Makes me think of 'The Man Who Fell To Earth' which adds to the poignant, sorrowful, morose feel. It perfectly captures that homesick slump, and the form is elegantly gorgeous. Perhaps you may want to connect to 'f' and 'ar' to keep it fluid? Other than that, I love this. Interesting shape, pretty colours, terrific meaning. Brilliant.